tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post8946389721655515071..comments2024-03-26T03:16:54.695-04:00Comments on Ignite to Write: Let's End It First!Jan Maderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15028376414981383091noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-53382158123923058542009-10-07T04:46:08.856-04:002009-10-07T04:46:08.856-04:00Will have to think about this, Jan. But what a fan...Will have to think about this, Jan. But what a fantastic method of working - much easier to write if you know what you're aiming for(even if the ending is changed eventually). I'm just starting something new and am going to try this.<br /><br />XSuzanne Ross Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08561888635304578484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-66128669763960748912009-10-07T00:30:14.906-04:002009-10-07T00:30:14.906-04:00At last I am snuggled in close to Mommy. Today I p...At last I am snuggled in close to Mommy. Today I protected her from strangers at the door, dogs outside and a bug. What a good day, I must rest now, for tomorrow may have new challenges and I must be ready.Ziggy Stardusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14203760234180476883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-9274433484302036472009-10-07T00:27:02.862-04:002009-10-07T00:27:02.862-04:00I am walking out this back door for the last time....I am walking out this back door for the last time. When I shut the door, will the memories be closed too? I turned around one more time and gazed upon the ice skates, rusted and tattered and smiled. The memories would always be with me and now so will the skates.Ziggy Stardusthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14203760234180476883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-49234183260956392952009-10-06T19:33:00.416-04:002009-10-06T19:33:00.416-04:00Kathryn asked, "Are we going to walk off into...Kathryn asked, "Are we going to walk off into the sunset?"<br />Thomas chuckled. "No.", he replied, "But I do think we should stay for the sunrise."2catshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10422139409011064601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-31414954660648450642009-10-06T16:15:03.516-04:002009-10-06T16:15:03.516-04:00Endings are the HARDEST things to write of all, ar...Endings are the HARDEST things to write of all, aren't they?<br /><br />Here's mine to go with the beginning in the last exercise:<br /><br />Kirima was ready to take his full place as head of his family. He was ready for a dog team of his own and was prepared to provide for his grandfather and grandmother. Why, in time, he would claim a wife much like Liak, with laughing eyes, tiny sewing stitches, and strong teeth. He was ready.<br />For, on this day in early spring, far from the winter seal camp he called home, Kirima had left childhood behind forever.Sailor's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18197022438697825577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-23692799814609530792009-10-06T10:48:58.737-04:002009-10-06T10:48:58.737-04:00These are all amazing! Is it just me, or do you w...These are all amazing! Is it just me, or do you want to write more too?Jan Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14110939764789565303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-88875897697205890532009-10-06T06:03:46.525-04:002009-10-06T06:03:46.525-04:00Beginning: Hi! My name is OC, which stands for Orn...Beginning: Hi! My name is OC, which stands for Ornery Critter, and I would like to tell you about my home in Corgi Country. <br /><br />Ending (Children's Book) I let her lick my face, and I licked hers and told her “Thank you, for helping me.” BG and Dott are very happy that we are going to try to be friends from now on. It might be nice to be friends instead of always feeling bad and mad. I think I will try it.ocmisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14573017187040669068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-6357510527152017732009-10-06T05:47:26.493-04:002009-10-06T05:47:26.493-04:00I love to write dramatic story ending...here's...I love to write dramatic story ending...here's another one!<br /><br />Prior to this journey, I always thought that the mind is superior to the body and that I could predict what would happen. I never knew that there are things that you wanted to see yet the mind cannot show it to you. Perhaps, the eyes are the only means to see what reality is, whether one likes it or not.Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492525710308662179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-19267539945818518572009-10-05T16:07:48.153-04:002009-10-05T16:07:48.153-04:00I took Green's small, dirty hand in mine and h...I took Green's small, dirty hand in mine and he grinned. "Ready for more adventures?" he asked.<br />I looked back at the fountain, the trees, the birds. This was my home now, but I couldn't stay. The King had other plans for me. <br /><br />"Let's go," I said, and we flickered into another new world.<br /><br /><br />~from The Flicker Chronicles: Bluewillow <br />(which I am writing now)Rachel Kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750953159925477298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-14127633417094346502009-10-05T10:54:42.412-04:002009-10-05T10:54:42.412-04:00Just another day in the land of corgis. Time to sw...Just another day in the land of corgis. Time to sweep again!^..^Corgidogmamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087352436997512186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-7285907804848756742009-10-05T09:58:18.218-04:002009-10-05T09:58:18.218-04:00Nope, Al. Just an ending! Yours was awesome!Nope, Al. Just an ending! Yours was awesome!Jan Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15028376414981383091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-22462495709799787282009-10-05T09:45:28.465-04:002009-10-05T09:45:28.465-04:00HI JAN,
TOM OPENED THE DOOR TO THE CABIN HIS EYES...HI JAN,<br /><br />TOM OPENED THE DOOR TO THE CABIN HIS EYES OPENED WIDE. "VICTORIA, IS THAT REALLY YOU". VICTORIA SMILED, AND SAID "YES TOM,I'VE COME HOME."<br /><br />HAVE A GREAT DAY! RIZZIRizzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14406039702833796261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-76436829803409738642009-10-05T01:54:23.052-04:002009-10-05T01:54:23.052-04:00Oops should it be the ending of the last week'...Oops should it be the ending of the last week's story?Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492525710308662179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-20713070339664423292009-10-04T23:39:52.924-04:002009-10-04T23:39:52.924-04:00The beginning sentence was
"The marshmellows ...The beginning sentence was<br />"The marshmellows were toasted to a golden brown"<br /><br />The ending sentence is<br /><br />"As I stood listening<br />to the murmur of the gushing water<br />plunging deep into the canyon<br />my senses awakened inside of me.<br />The splendorious display<br />in the heavely sky<br />were triggering emotions<br />in my soul.<br />My memory has returned<br />and I know<br />that I can really <br />tust again"Tweedles -- that's mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349728497621875670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-85925291509333787262009-10-04T22:21:31.530-04:002009-10-04T22:21:31.530-04:00Jan,
For kids right?
How about ...and after the l...Jan,<br /><br />For kids right?<br />How about ...and after the last cop left our living room, my mom turned to me and said " I guess you're right. Your brother could sleep through anything!"Tony Yusehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04445418119599274300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-36136188488512439012009-10-04T20:59:11.108-04:002009-10-04T20:59:11.108-04:00Wow Al, that is an awsome, uplifting ending if you...Wow Al, that is an awsome, uplifting ending if you ask me.Tweedles -- that's mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349728497621875670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-83222978619957000062009-10-04T20:59:06.454-04:002009-10-04T20:59:06.454-04:00You're right, it is a bit emotional, but what ...You're right, it is a bit emotional, but what an amazing ending to a story....I need to go look at your previous blog...I thought I was just at your place! Need to go reread!Jan Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15028376414981383091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-42446778116203142572009-10-04T20:48:13.357-04:002009-10-04T20:48:13.357-04:00Okay I got this lines from my previous blog...it&#...Okay I got this lines from my previous blog...it's a bit emotional but it's how I ended my story.<br /><br />Typhoons come and go in this country and they say we are so used to it and we always prevail. We can let all the materials things go as long as we stand and stay together, help each other. We know we will be able to survive again with our heads up high, despite the grievances over one's loss which would always be left unhealed forever.Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492525710308662179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2785289118138399807.post-91783445058793310172009-10-04T19:48:17.311-04:002009-10-04T19:48:17.311-04:00Write a sentence or two or three that could end yo...Write a sentence or two or three that could end your famous story.Jan Maderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15028376414981383091noreply@blogger.com